Bare Canvas - Discussion

its messy IMO and the smudging messes up flow. Text is OK, could be better positioned. Cant tell wut it is. Nice colors

 

It looks good. Decent depth and flow.

Text is probably your biggest issue here.

Also, perhaps a little bit more colour might help.

 

@ NoBe: Get rid of the wireframes faded in the background, otherwise nice.

@Galione: A bit dull. More colours, pl0x. :wub:

@Req: The gray/white blotch flowing down in the middle looks distutbing IMO. Depth and text is <333.

 

:huh:


hot hot tags guys. welcome to galione (<3 that perspective tag) and int..w/e

bye hotrocks..

i was in creative fever last night:

 

first b/w and and last are hot, dont like all the lines on the last one. Flow's kinda messed up on the first one. 2nd one is too messy, like you stuffed the canvas with a lot of c4ds. GJ though, man Im stuck wtih a friggn science report to finish tonight...

 

i <3 the third one

 

all look great the last one is the best but the third one is the most unique out of the set

 

my latest

 

The lighting/coloring is nice but it looks awkwardly stretched imo

 

midna got thrown against the wall....and now she's pissed.



BG and effects are from scratch.

 

if they made from scratch that looks real good nicej ob

 

frodo:



default GIMP smudge practice.

 

Looks pretty cool, but I think you should try to bring him out a little more.

 

OHMAGAWD

I PLACED IN THE SOTW

IT'S ALL 'CAUSE OF YOU

<33333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333

 

heh i knew you would place in one of the tiers in the SOTW