lose the ram stock,doesn't flow well imo.Add some nice lighting to the render.Pretty nice sig though,maybe your best.
Ur first tag in ur sig is ur best IMO. Could do with some lighting, and also could use some contrast. The focal is very blurred, which makes it unappealing and thus partially ruins the tag. Very Monotone. Text actually fits very well though, that's one thing I really liked about this tag. Keep working hard!