Getting better on the depth on your tags. Focals still need to be brought out more IMO, may be try darkening the edges some and adding a healthy light source some where around your focal to bring it out more. Try not to force the light though.. Some examples of forced light. You can clearly tell on both of these tags that a soft brushed was used to make both of the sources of light and no thought and effort was put into how to place the lighting.. One thing look to look at WHEN you do place your light which side of your render or stocks face already has light hitting it? I will also show you some examples of this and how I incorporated it into my tags.. Here are the stocks I used for the tags.. http://s44.photobucket.com/albums/f34/dab1...urrent=1135.jpg http://s44.photobucket.com/albums/f34/dab1...rent=model3.jpg And of course the tags they were used in.. But anyways hope this helps you out some. ^_^