Away.

I actually made this one a week or two ago, ive just been extremely busy.



(no colored, im really bad at getting the desired colors so:/)

c&c is greatly appreciated

 

just I'm not sure 'bout left side. anyway your current top is sex

 

i like the depth on this one

 

thanks, anymore?

 

Good flow.
Work on the focal point, I guess it is not really there.
Lay some effects over the focal so it is clear where it is.
Since it is a b/w sig it is even more important.
I know that the focal is there, but I think you should
improve it so that the sig at whole gets better.