assassins creed

Initially I found this render and thought it looked pretty awesome. Working on the tag however seemed to be a different story. I feel indifferent about this tag, Ii don't love it, but I also don't hate it.
V2


originals

 

Its far, far too light. Has a nice flow going on and good composition. Maybe not have it being monochromatic either?

 

got to agree with majin. the one with the text is better its a nice fill-up

 

I think the one with the text is better, simply because i think the shoulder could be blended better.. and the text covers it.

 

updated in first post! thanks for the comments so far

 

I don't like the tag at all, first of all it's way to bright . Second I don't see any effects or any good flow going on here. I would rather have you do another tag and try more colors KIU though.

 

even with the v2 you still feel like its too bright ?

 

well v2 is dimmed down a bit but, i still wish you'd use color i'm not much of a B/W tag person, and it's hard to get good outcomes out of one also,considering most of your effects and depth are taken away sometimes.

 

I wouldnt mind more color =/ nice txt

 

I think the originals would have looked awesome if they had a bit of red put in somewhere

 

As someone said it needs more color. Even though It would be hard to put color because all he has is white costume but other then that great sig.

 

V2 isn't bad at all, get the glow off the render and blur away from the text and you got a nice sig right there