Another Try At Sprites

here's my second try at sprite tags.



CnC is very appreciated

 

focal is too small,work on it and work on coloring

 

I can't even really tell what it is. It all just seems overcrowded with effects. The only thing I really like about it is the text. My rating: 3/10

 

It's also way to bright, can't look at it for a long time so it's impossible to find out what the sprite actualy is.

 

sprite? really? im more of a 7-up guy.
ps i dont see the bottle in sig, where is it?