Another Shot At It

<div align="center">Well i took into account on what was posted in my last CnC so here's what i came up with this time.</div>

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pretty good dude, very nice render choice and well placed, the bg effect is nice and isn't too flat, ur composition is very nice overall :] assuming the hand is out a little ways from her body then the lighting is great too very nice overall ^_^

 

Thats alright dude, nice compo, but I think the wing is a lil over sharpened, brings you away from the focal ..

 

this one would look better with more deapth

 

Not bad. Maybe up the contrast some.

 

Agreed. I think if you darkened up some parts of the tag it would help with depth. Need a little something in the foreground.

 

tyvm all for giveing me some input on it...i'll keep at it an maybe i might win the SOTW some day

 

i like the background great work