Another One

http://i92.photobucket.com/albums/l36/xogr...lashpage1-2.png

http://i92.photobucket.com/albums/l36/xogr...lashpage1-4.png
critisim greatly appreciated

Copyrights to me

 

I dont understand..how people can do some of this stuff

I cant find anything to say negative about.

Good jbo

 

thx for comment

 

links need to be more easy to see

 

The nav bit sticking out kills it's entire composition, if it was symmetrical it would look far nicer.

 

Very nice, i really want to know how to make these sort of things. Appart from the nav blending in too much, its great.

 

The lighting on the nav is alright. The whole upper needs work. Plus I don't like the highlights in the blue bars. Nice concept though. It's nearly there.

-Dark Horse

 

looks nice!

i wanna know how to make a template
(i'm kinda noob in gfx )

 

updated thx for comments

 

I hate these style things, so ovr thought and complex

 

yeah it´s realy messed up and difficult but it´s impresive for noobs .

 

The update looks far far worse, just too messy.

 

Yea I dont like the updated one...there's like, no banner, too..
messy,

 

Upadeted
-added content
-added new sites
-removed parts of the header
-More effects in the header

what i´m going to do
-changing things of the navi
-adding footer
-Adding More Details

thx for your replies

 

Yea i think that looks better, great job