Another Halo Smudge

I am really trying to improve and work on some smudging...what do you all think?

V1


V2 (removed C4D)


V3 (removed text and added sharpen to render)

 

added V2 (remooved C4d on left)

 

v1
sharpen
lose the typo!

 

try a V3...brb

thanks Diverse!!

 

V3 added with changes suggested from Diverse....

opinions now?

 

I'd say V2, maybe try to do some tutorials on smudging.

Needs some more depth and sharpen the focal. But looks pretty good overall since you're still trying to improve on smudging. ^_^

 

thanks Chris...definetely trying to improve....I will try more and read up on smudging to help me out, thanks again!

 

anyone else?

 

V3 is the best if you didn't have the background sharpened, next time erase around your focal it gives it more depth.
Great sig btw

 

thanks Sib!! i am working to improve. i appreciate the feedback!!

 

I like the colors!

V3 is what I like the best. keep it up!

 

thank you Snowy

 

A little messy, but v3 seems much better than v1 & v2.

 

Thanks Forevvei....working to improve...

 

anyone else?