Another Attempt On Template

Discussion in 'Website Design and Coding' started by .Axel, Aug 14, 2009.

  1. .Axel

    .Axel Well-Known Member

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    Here is another template that i made... i some wht coded this one... so yea :)

    My Template
     
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    Sanity Penguin My sex is on fire

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    Not bad, bit simplistic though. The navigation could use some darker colours Imo and the text needs some fixing too.
    It's too big in width and I feel it should be more centered onto the buttons maybe :)

    Anyhow, hard to judge like this, maybe add some dummy content?
     
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    Much better than your previous template. Quite a big leap you made there. Very colorful, if a bit clashing. As SP said, this could use some dummy content before any finalized criticism.
     
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    work on the fonts. dont blend a color into white if you have a white bg. for the rest, its a bit simplistic, like vellocets said add some dummy content go to lipsum.com for some dummy text ;)
     
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    thanks guys :) added dummy text
     
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    Pretty cool, buttons maybe a little bit too glossy but other than that top notch job :lol:

    Good job!
     
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    lol thanks :)
     
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    Coding is a bit off. Just a tip, full black and full white backgrounds are EXTREMELY hard to work with. I suggest using light yellows, blue-greens, or even oranges. Dark grays also work. Try to stay away from the pixel floral patterns though as they've been severely whored by every graphics site.
     
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    looks nice m8.

    Only 2 things i would change .

    Lose the gloss on the buttons like Insomnia allready stated. And remove the lines in your logo .

    Change this and it will be great :) .

    Dr!ver.

    PS; Not breaking it down just some c&c . :)

     
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    thanks :)
     

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