here it is. I dont think it is as good as the other "latest" one but i think its ok i think something is wrong but i cant figure it out. the C4D i had it i thought was perfect for it, but now it seems its not... i think the goggle things got smeared a bit too much...
Agreed the goggles realli mess up the look and flow of it; text needs work..try mixing it up with a combo of green and gray..not just green ya know. with some more defined shadows and a bit of tweaking, this would look very nice
You are definitely getting better, remember though, never distort your render, unless you plan to use it for something else other than the focal.
ok thanks guys, ill definately remember that tip. and yeah i never get the text right lol. i think im gunna start working on just 1, because everytime i do a new one, i do something wrong. so i think ill work with one, then get ur suggestions and tweak that one instead
What is with the stupid size? Is it a sig, or a large piece, or what? Also, why are you blurring and smudging the render and background like that? It looks like crap. If you want to smudge, do a tutorial and learn how. Basically, all I have to say to you, is go do tutorials.
look if u have that attitude u dont need to post here and make commentd like that^ okay i say its the same thing with all ur work...it jus looks like random backgorun and u ve put a render on it, u really need to start blending stuff in maybe try few tuts aswell. Try adj layers i think therrs so many options n that graident maps, colour balance etc jus try and see what u come up with.I would again advice u to change ur font aswell.
k so, change your #$@!$$#% smudge settings. lulz .imho not getting better as ur sticking to one style that doesnt even work, low qual GO DO TUTS .
