I would make it smaller if your gonna leave that much blank space, text placement is good but the actual text doesn't fit. Decent effects but it seems like something is missing, theres not really any lighting/depth. practice practice practice goodluck
I've been taught that anime or comic looking signature arts are seldom. In other words, don't go for a style you would usually do with a game or person tag. Instead, a design type. Perhaps something that goes really well with it other than the c4dz. They only look a tad overwhelming and the render kinda gets lost in there. Smudge works a lot and also vector types of brushes also work. I can give you an example if you wish. Not trying to sound like an ass, but everything has it's styles and looks and to some, c4dz work in other such as this, well, you get the my point. It's very good, but I just wanted to point you in a better direction, if you feel me. But that's your decision not mine. Kiu-
