[anime] My First Render

Well anyways I've been browsing this forums for a while now and I came across Kazuya's rendering tutorial so I decided to try it and maybe get into rendering. Well here is my frist render that I did today. Please comment and tell me how can I improve. Thanks.

Original

Render:



-ReanimatedWolf B)

 

a lil choppy on the hair anyway nice cut and render

 

little choppy and slight bit of white around some edges, but not a bad cut for first try. keep workin at it

 

Sorry about the user posted image but Ripway sucks ass and Photobucket resizes. :-\ Any good hosts you guys might suggest?

Photobucket Hosted Render:

 

There seems to be a small whitish outline around nearly half of the render. It is quite unnoticable, but after finding it and looking at it, it gets unappealing.

 

Try www.imageshack.us thats the one i use doesnt resize but it doesnt keep it all in a kind of "folder" for if you want to just copy and paste it again.

 

http://www.gamerenders.com/forum/index.php...dpost&p=1955858