An Explosion Of Life

My first post here. Treat me gently.

http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/51523876/

 

Anybody?????

 

Common guys. I don't mean to be rude, but 30 views and no replies. I can't get any better if I don't get some feed back.

 

Wow dude thats really cool

 

Aight, it's very nice to bad of the edges but I will give it a 7 out of 10!

 

The C4D is too sharp, especially in the middle of it. The text is really ugly. Color ain't bad. I'd give it contrast.

 

Thanks for the criticism. I appreciate it.

 

Yeah i have to agree with EFX about the text, it just looks ugly. For a piece that is essentially a c4d render it is pretty good, but I never really liked this kind of thing too much. Still, its pretty cool, maybe if the c4d wasn't so sharp it would be better.

 

its nice but maybe add sum depth and a light source, also the brushing doesnt really match the render

 

Alright thanks guys. I wanna make my own C4D's, but I don't know how to.