You got some incorrect punctuation in the content and you also got words hanging off the lines. For example, One day Mary went to pick up a bask- <--- basket would be the word hanging off. et. I don't understand why you got planes flying and planets when you offer web design :huh: Its completely irrelevant to web design and doesn't lure me to use you instead of any other web design people/company. I also reckon the links should go: HOME - ABOUT US - SERVICES - GALLERY - LINKS - CONTACT instead. or HOME - SERVICES - GALLERY - LINKS - ABOUT US - CONTACT. It also looks like you haven't thought about people using different resolutions because the top half of a web page is the most important part of the web page and you only got your contact details filling the whole of that section. In the top part you should have the links and the name of the website first (just like Gamerenders) and then whatever else you want I guess. EDIT: Remember to add the .com onto your email address
Looks pretty amazing! I don't really like the way the planets are colored or duplicated, but thats just my opinion
