Amaterasu

Something I just made, I had the concept planned out since yesterday..



V2


V3

 

I love your effects. But I don't know if that is the way you would blend that type of render, must be me . But you have negative space to the right. There feels like there is no depth. But the focal I think should be centered more to avoid that negative space to the right and make your focal more attractive. When I look at it I don't look straight at the focal at look towards the middle. It might be just me.

 

Oh ok, ya I can move it to the right some. Thanks

 

yup agree with the above the sig is nice but the only thing for me is the blending of the stock it just seems off to me

 

ok good....I thought I was the only one.... :mellow:

 

Really? I think everything looked fine, I just done like that green

 

Okay I fixed most of the green on the right..

 

yea looks pritty sweet now
v3 is def the best of the bunch..

 

Looks better. Better blending and there isn't as much negative space.

 

Thanks.. Although I still feel like the focal doesn't stand out as much as I'd like it to for some reason..

 

I think it makes a better avatar imo. The right side isn't as good ast the left.

 

lol

wtf do you mean with concept? xD

anyway
too much negative space
contrast looks bad
colours could use some work