Altair Signature.

So, I took the advice of everyone from the sarah chalke signature, and wanted to try something different. I hope it has a little more depth, even though it's a lot more simple. I like this style, but i need some critique.



Second version, just added the bit at the top:



I also added a version of v2 sharpened more, I couldn't decide which one i liked more:

 

it's too bright for me... haha... and i don't like the text... but gj

 

yea, i was trying to go for the white style, but i think i overdid it. thanks for that.

 

i reckon, mayb sharpened version, but that top bit, make it half as thick and stick one on the top and one on the bottom.
sharpened version looks best IMO

 

Yes the sharpened version is the best amongst the others. But the top bit, for me, it is not needed