Air (v2 Up!)

What do you guys think of this? Hot off the press.



v2:

 

the lines disrupt the flow
nice tag tho

 

I agree,especially like the soft color and the depth.good job

 

Thanks for the responses! Here it is without the lines. Better?

 

I like V1. But, the flow is good.

 

Blending needs some work. Also, the effects seem really washed out and colorless, perhaps a few adjustment layers.

 

Agreed with the rest. It's fairly monotone so work with the colors. Great start though

 

Thanks for the critique guys!

 

Pretty nice flow, but as mentioned, could need some adjustement layers.
Maybe add a bw version?^^