Advice Needed On Song Please. Greatly Appreciated

so my band tried to go for a song thats moshy like. and this is a part of it.
the qualitys kinda bad, but u can still understand it.

our songs werent like this b4. we had songs that were slower, more skaish and more lyricly better.

this is just a step in a dircetion that we dont know if we should head in.

please comment on this: hopefully its good. <3 =D

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4iRK-HXEJmA

 

Your drummer reminds me of Quagmire from Family guy (the way he moves his head).

And I can't hear anything clearly, so either it's crap, but the quality of the video is too horrible to critique anything.

 

yah its really bad quality =[

 

Dear God no. take my advice stay away from that screamo crap and go for something people can understand.

 

bad quality

 

ranjom is that only because you dont like screamo?

 

this is terribleness from all angles. it sounds like one big hardcore breakdown...

 

i dont like it