Abstract.

What do you think, its my first in a long while

so CnC would be very much appreciated

also, which do you prefer and what can make it better?

 

First has better depth and colouring. It needs a clear focal and perhaps a stronger light source.

 

More depth

 

To dark.. . .. needs....light =]

 

I feel like there's no real focal point. Adding more depth to it would help.

 

So It would need more of a focal point and depth?
seems like a lost cause.
eh, oh well I was just experimenting with filters and such since its been a while