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  1. Nov 9, 2007 at 4:31 AM #1
    Braydan

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    *another one

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    Ver.2

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  2. Nov 16, 2007 at 1:43 AM #2
    Daecu

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    i like the one where theres a little splash of golf, the first one is a bit messy though
     
  3. Nov 16, 2007 at 3:39 AM #3
    LostUchiha

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    The focal in both tags is very weak imho.
     
  4. Nov 16, 2007 at 10:38 AM #4
    Ini

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    The focal is weak in both and it would look much better with colours IMO
     
  5. Nov 16, 2007 at 11:11 AM #5
    Hoplite_A2

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    The compos are cool,m but like the above
    said, very weak foculs. Leaves your eyes wandering
    a bit. :(

    But the comp's great, just work on those foculs. :D
     
  6. Nov 16, 2007 at 11:16 AM #6
    [T] Torrent

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    Weak focals, also wanna see in color.
     
  7. Nov 16, 2007 at 11:30 AM #7
    Daecu

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    i wasnt really looking for a focal, he did say they're abstracts :/
     

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