Abstract Vert

Discussion in 'Signatures' started by mobi861, Aug 22, 2009.

  1. mobi861

    mobi861 Well-Known Member

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    [​IMG] V2 [​IMG]
    i followed a tutorial :)
     
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    I don't really like this one
    The contrast is a little high, and it's pretty boring
    Good text though
     
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    [​IMG]
    better?
     
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    Yeah, the latest is the best. Try doing some type of effect in the bg on the light blue section.

    Text is cool though, yeah.
     
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    I love it, though it would be nice to see a gradient in the background. Text is alright, could use some work, do not like it centered.
     
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    Don't know what you guys are talking about, great tag, even if he followed a tut.
    V2 <3

    Nice work mate, but as Valar said, work in a gradient background, would improve it.
     
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    I like the text alot, but everything is a little bland. I think if you added more darks and lights it would really make this piece "pop." Also the top part seems empty, mabye you could add something to help with the flow. Sorry if the critique was a little harsh, I am just trying to get you better.
     

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