Abstract Rays

Constructive criticism please.

 

sweet, i'd like to see more depth in the background but the effect you have right now is pretty boss
EDIT
and the text is hard to see...I only saw it when I scrolled back up...I first thought it was apart of the focal point...

 

Thanks .

 

Cool !! I love the part that hangs out !


I wanna try doin somethin like this someday...

But yeh -- text is very hard to read.. i like the simple background tho

 

so far looking good
i like the idea but its needs more work in the bg .try adding somthg in the bg

 

yep, simple but tastefull...

as has been said text color matches to well, hehehe