Thnx for the comments ya i feel like it needs sumthing too, im gonna try adding more tech or sumthing.
get rid of that abstract style thing top right, replace with sum tech me thinks... and can u post render plz? its a nice render 9/10 for sig 10/10 if you remove the abstract thingy
I like it... nice render. I like your abstract work, the text suits me well, i like everything, im not too sure about the color but that's great. 9.3/10