the outcome looks fine man, i am to tired to read it now tho maybe tomorow one comment tho... theres a lot of text and kinda dropped up, makes it harder to follow and just globally have a look at it
Its ok I guess but imo the scanlines kinda kill it for me. I might try it out later if I have the time.
It's not really my style anymore, but I like the technique you used. Maybe a little too much black space for the text. Thanks for sharing.