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Discussion in 'Signatures' started by Pulse., Dec 12, 2007.

  1. Dec 12, 2007 at 10:24 PM #1
    Pulse.

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    so its 3:30am and im feeling tired...

    its still a work in progress, im trying something different to all the other assasins creed tags ive seen on various sites. Nothing on this so far is final, if you have any ideas throw em at me :tongue:


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  2. Dec 12, 2007 at 10:31 PM #2
    USSilentSniper

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    Looks sweet, keep going with it.
    Some blurred/smooth foreground effects would work here IMO.
     
  3. Dec 12, 2007 at 10:35 PM #3
    Magne

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    It looks fine so far for a WIP.
    The tech lines don't look good for this stock/render, distracting the focal and ruining depth.
    Get rid of the custom shape, doesn't belong.
     
  4. Dec 12, 2007 at 11:07 PM #4
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    Looks good, I think the tech lines really go with it well. Looks like it came right out of the game.
     
  5. Dec 12, 2007 at 11:10 PM #5
    Hadouken

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    Too big imo, but since it's a wip.
     
  6. Dec 12, 2007 at 11:11 PM #6
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    wow a good tech sig. and appropriate to the render too. I'm impressed.
     
  7. Dec 12, 2007 at 11:38 PM #7
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    Crop it down a bit.

    Keep building on that tech ----, though.
     
  8. Dec 12, 2007 at 11:59 PM #8
    CarpeDiem

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    Chemistry!!! Ahhh!
     
  9. Dec 13, 2007 at 12:23 AM #9
    Jyorei

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    1. Bird icon, i don't like..distracts from focal point
    2. Ease down a TAD WITTLE bit on the tech thingy..

    But tech + that render = unique and awesome so far..

    You could definitely pull it off..:) looking forward for results!!
     
  10. Dec 13, 2007 at 3:25 AM #10
    LostUchiha

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    Looks beautiful mate. The pen tool is nice. Nice depth, and I looove the lighting. The text should be moved somewhere to the left imo. Looks awkward where it is right now. But hey, it's still a work in progress right? Good luck on finishing it.
     
  11. Dec 13, 2007 at 4:25 PM #11
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    So you've played the game I see lol, i don't know what you should add, just do your thang
     
  12. Dec 13, 2007 at 4:38 PM #12
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    its too empty for the size

    maybe put a little more in it
    or reduce the canvas

    good techy stle though ;)
     
  13. Dec 13, 2007 at 4:42 PM #13
    .Atreyu

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    Too random in places for me and then theres a lot of empty space. I can see what you were going for but it looks to empty and random. Clean it up a bit and maybe make it smaller so you have less empty canvas to work with, that might make things easier for you.
     
  14. Dec 13, 2007 at 4:43 PM #14
    Monster8327

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    i say put more of that lines and letters in the bg
     
  15. Dec 13, 2007 at 4:58 PM #15
    Pulse.

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    @ Kennedy - yeh ive played the game :tongue: thats what gave me this idea and yeh its still a wip, im gonna try and finish it off later today if not the weekend ^_^

    thanks for the comments guys
     

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