Hmm... It's not bad. But I think it would look a lot better if the bg were blurred and the focul was a bit more sharp. Text is really hard to read. :| V1 is the best. Maybe some more foreground effects too. But overall it's not bad mate. Keep it up
I agree, V1 is the best. The tag has too many unneeded C4D effects and the text is very grainy. Try adding more depth as well.