A Collab Sig

Discussion in 'Signatures' started by slappy.king, Nov 2, 2008.

  1. slappy.king

    slappy.king Well-Known Member

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    We have team battles on my board and this is my teams entry, final entries have to be in by the 7th Nov, so C n C needed -

    The Stock -

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    I was given this and asked to finish it off -

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    This is how i modified it -

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    Please leave a comment.
     
  2. Evilchiwawa

    Evilchiwawa Well-Known Member

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    1+1 = 20?
    I don't see any similarity to what you were originally given xD

    As for C&C:
    - your main light source is above and in front of her, yet there is light on the other side of her neck, where lighting is at its darkest. The render seems to demand that the light source come from bellow.
    - Her nose needs blending o_O

    I like the background and text though :>
     
  3. thesickness89

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    2nd is much much better
     
  4. slappy.king

    slappy.king Well-Known Member

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    The sigs wer'nt supposed to be similar, lol, its a collab sig, so one members does a bit then another member does another bit etc etc etc.

    I also added the stock so you could see the light on the stock.

    You can see some of the original (the first sig) in the second sig if you look carefully.

    Thanks for the comments so far, more needed.
     
  5. SuvivoR

    SuvivoR Well-Known Member

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    honestly it looks like you did all the work but nice outcome anyway :)
     
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    Looks like you just completely remade the tag, not much of a collab, but the outcome is pretty decent.
     
  7. GRAF1CS

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    agree, maybe u should send it back to other person so they can add sumn, lol
     
  8. slappy.king

    slappy.king Well-Known Member

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    lol, yre maybe, the problem is he's a newbie at photoshop and im not so i was bound to do a little extra, thanks for the comments though.
     
  9. th3drag0n

    th3drag0n Well-Known Member

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    i bet when you got given the .psd it was only
    3-4 layers :P

    and indeed the onl thing i would edit change
    is the light as has been said already,

    other than the light source on her neck,
    its pritty sweet.
     

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