4v Showoff Thread

Up for sale on my auction here: http://www.gamerenders.com/forum/index.php?showtopic=383062

 

the c4d effects are pretty chaotic imo.

 

Tell me which to current and why.
They are all made with the same background.
I really work a long time on them so please I need REAL C&C! =)

 

hey guys this is the show off thread, when you post your work also give critique to the ones others posted up!

- smile, did you make the bg yourself? id have to say number 2, but its pretty plain altogether.

- crazy, has a nice flow but some places are too sharp and the text is to be desired.

 

Me and Smile did an awesome collab. That's how it turned out, she's making her own version soon.

 

cool i take another look at it

 

phoenix could use some more work ont he coloring, and effects are a bit chaotic

whaddaya think

 

very nice work you have there sir i like

 

this is to to-love-ru right? if it is.. A+ xD

 

Zephy, I really like what you did for this piece. I think it's too bright though.

 

fourstar yah the bg is to love ru , one of my fav mangas. o and whats ur name on nsl? i seen that avy before and your works look familiar..
@smile - tag looks strangely sharpened colors ande ffects need work.
@grim - just needs more, its too plain and monotone.

 

< new avi =)

 

@Phoenix - right side looks good but the left looks flat, also that orange thing looks out of place there

@Grimweld - I think it would be better if you somewhat smudge that blob of brushing on the bottom so the lighting looks more realistic

@Zephy - it's dash. but I haven't been active nor posted anything there for like a year now.