Nice job for a fourth render dude. I remember doing this render also a while ago, only I left the glow around the lighting. My opinion is that it looks kinda weird without the glow, because he has the glow in front of his body... Keep at it and keep them coming! T-Virus
yea like already mentioned, the hair needs a bit of work and you should of left the lightining glow, would of made for a better sig