4th Attempt

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  1. Nov 1, 2007 at 6:47 AM #1
    star99

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    <span style="font-family:Times New Roman">#4 Attempt</span>
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    This is my 4th try what do you think.... i know i still need to improve on text im havin a lot of probles with text for some reason.. any tips would mean a lot to me thks.

    Plz crit my work
     
  2. Nov 1, 2007 at 8:28 PM #2
    darkigcsig

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    Yea what you said about the text is right and i have the same problem with text umm i think its a little dark but thats just me. Maybe a bit more action in the background. Also more flow.
     
  3. Nov 1, 2007 at 8:40 PM #3
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    ya true it is a bit dark.... here is my next one im tryin left out the text this time :P

    i just wantded to see if i could achive depth, so plz tell me if i have im not too sure...

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