Hmmm... Ok first fix your text.. maybe add some effects to it or something and also half the B is cut off.. Also try and find a better quality render..looks blurry.. BG looks pretty good tho..
background is good, but the render doesnt look like its good quality, and the text is too simple, try another font, and maybe some effects, but other than that, its preety good (talking about the background)
Render is very pixelated....bg is good. Your name needs to be moved over a little more coz the B is half way under the border. The borders to thick.
