I like the tag, but you could chance a few things: - Work on your flow. The tag is all over the place. - Get rid of the red lighting and change it to a blue color. - Add a sharpened applied image layer.
I love how the background is in terms of brightness and colors, but it really overrides the render. Nicely done overall, just wish the render was more inregrated rather than chopped up and put into the background.