2nd Render Ever

Original
http://www.crcerror.com/xboxlivefrance/hal...2_2_800-600.jpg

 

very smooth edges, but the bit coming out of the gun looks a bit wierd, not ur fault tho

 

Fire from gun gets choippy but body is great

 

Yep and the body its good

 

try smudging the edges of the gunfire to smoothen it. Other than that great render

 

Very usable. Nice job!

 

wow thats really good for a second render. no choppy bits. just need to work on effects like gun fire etc but all in all 9/10

 

Yea i admit that the fire coming out of the gun is a lil bit weird but its REALY difficult to render that part if you look at the Original picture...I can hardly see difference between background and fire...So good job realy ^^

Im impress for your sec render ever :wub:

 

thx I now know what to do next time on the gun shots

 

ecxellent render :lol: - tiny bit choppy under the legs though. good work B)

 

Just erase the gun flash and the render is perfect.

 

good for a second render

 

I was goin to do that then said na

 

ok for a 2nd render

 

Halo renders are boring, but the rendering work is really good for a second render, only the fire is a lil choppy, but overall a good work.