~2nd Attempt~ Army Of Two Render

ok so the other one was really crappy. i tried it again with the polygonal lasso tool. this time its much smoother and i made sure to get every single little spot. C&C please! btw thanks for your patience guys!
original image

 

uh, oh very choppy, looks like it was cut with eraser
Im soory, I dont like it

try using pentool, and check Huy-N's rendering tutorial, It's very useful, helped me a lot

 

ok thanks man. i did use teh eraser lol. ill check his tut and give it another try

 

Yea, very very choppy. I like the actual picture, but that chunk missing from one of their heads is kind of.. discouraging. Keep trying!

 

lol i just noticed that. must have slipped and not noticed it i usually jsut ctrl shift z when i slip like that but i thought it it was supposed to look that way. ill give it another try and put it in instead of this one

EDIT: wait, look at the original! there is a missing section in the guy on the right.

 

very choppy and I've seen em done tons b4. You also missed spots in the bottom left.

 

i redid it using the polygonal lasso earlier. thought it looked loads better now

 

seems pretty clean gj

 

thanks!

 

much better

keep it up, and practice!

 

Edit: bah, This shouldnt have happened...
why did the same post appear twice?

 

yeah that happens to me sometimes on other forums. anyways i did another render. heres teh link
http://www.gamerenders.com/forum/index.php?showtopic=359416
btw thanks for the comment!

 

agreed.

 

thanks!

 

Much better now. Tbh, I saw the original here and didn't even bother commenting. So yea, definitely don't use eraser anymore lol.