Hmm... Looks nice. The area around the focal is a tad chaotic imo. It's also a little hard to find the focal. Also, it has some of that floating head syndrome. Colors are nice though. Oh, and some areas seem a bit too sharp for my taste.
it dont look bad, at all, but i think some effects look bit messy, like on the bottom left looks strange but its okay. maybe blur some of the backgorund coz it all looks together kinda thing.