2 New Templates.

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  1. retal

    retal Senior Member

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    I don't really like the transparency on the first . The technical look and the wood texture don't fit together...

    The second one looks good.Though everything looks a bit too big in my eyes.
     
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    The first looks way too technical for a portfolio. I don't think I would enjoy the music at the bottom. I LOVE LP and all, but the fact that it would be playing over my music, or over anything else, is just a shame. Unless the page starts with it off, and the browser can enable it. Then even so, it wouldn't be played often at all.

    The second looks iffy. Very simple looking, and because of all the placeholders it doesn't look good. I think if you filled in the placeholders, even with something simple, I'd be more attracted.

    Nice effort though, very good job in the end. :)
     
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    I'm still trying to learn so thx for the feedback :)
     
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    Looks good
     
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    1st: atleast make the buttons transparency the same as the main body.

    2nd. It is nice just everything seems to big.
     
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    You know how to make them but try lookin at some of the templates that the people at evoke make. Not saying yours is bad it just looks simple.
     
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    work on the typo on both.
     
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    .ZERO Nig┬Łga wit a PSD

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    They've got a pretty good look to them but you need to work on the typography, both font selection and sizing
     

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