the first one is F****** cool and the second one too but the work u didi on the second look like a DIOR advertisment. They both are cool.
im gonna have to say the first 1 is awesome. the 2nd one is definetly missin sumthing. 4 1, u can try to try to pimp the text out.try to blend the text. might also wanna add some vectors and vector brushing on the 2nd 1 and maybe a landscape for a BG.