2 More Renders

Discussion in 'GR Classic Archive' started by Ninja Special, Sep 3, 2006.

  1. Sep 3, 2006 at 7:13 AM #1
    Ninja Special

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    Firstly the DOA Render I did. I kinda went bad on the shoes at the bottom and on her right hand near her clothes. Anyways:

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    On this BF 2142 I mucked up the left gun down the barrel.

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    Overall I think I've improved because I don't think there are as many black or white lines as my first :D

    EDIT: Ah, on the grey background the DOA looks pretty bad :(
     
  2. Sep 3, 2006 at 7:43 AM #2
    Tenkaichi Fan

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    they look nice, but i don't like the pics
     
  3. Sep 5, 2006 at 7:56 PM #3
    joeym4692

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    I like the second one! GJ
     
  4. Sep 5, 2006 at 7:58 PM #4
    .Hate

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    nice cuts but i dont like the picture
     
  5. Sep 5, 2006 at 10:46 PM #5
    phoenixblue

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    1st one is a bit choppy but the 2nd one looks very good.
     
  6. Sep 6, 2006 at 12:49 AM #6
    Evanesce

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    The first one is choppy in a few spots, like her hair and clothes, and for some reason I just don't like the picture.

    The second one looks great! Keep it up, and you will improve more and more!
     
  7. Sep 6, 2006 at 3:09 AM #7
    Naej

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    first one has some choppy ares. 2nd one is better but has some whites..Gj. keep on improving
     
  8. Sep 7, 2006 at 12:34 AM #8
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    quite choppy, however stil not a bad cut. keep it up !
     
  9. Sep 7, 2006 at 7:57 PM #9
    .Rage.

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    good clean cuts
    i wouldnt use it though
    lol
     

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