I reviewed your -reps... I found that in my opinion you deserved 6 out of the 11 -reps he recieved. So go ahead and interperet his rep now... judgemental people I see it coming out to + 3 if people didn't PMS on him so much Feel free to PM me in 20 days and I will +rep you...
Better than my first attempt.. I would say do something with that links bar down the side, make it fit with the rest of the template, just looks way out of place. Also have you thought about how you'll cut & code it with those wire things draping across the content window?
slam thats a kool template greatwork for your first try and n3ptun3 stop beaning a ass its not kool ;(
Neptune is doing what everyone should be doing on this forum, constructive critism, though cc may sound harsh, we are tryying to point out what is wrong with the template, how it can be imrproved. Comments such as GJ do not help people improve, and comments saying thats awful without any backup to support it also do not help, so below find my CC, then flame me all you want, however all i am doing is helping. (Please not these comments should not be taken to offend but to improve) - Overall it is a poor template, however as it is your first understandable, I would first sudgest keep making templates, and goto some tutorial sites, the more you practice, the more you post them on here the better you will get. - Yes the template is far to small ideally make temps about 760 px wide - The wires require some texture on them, - whats with that link bar?, you have over done the gradient on that, the numbers get hard to read when you get to 6 - You need to make the join of the wires more realistic - try not to make the wires go over the content box, you have made this area more restricted - The nav bar text should be black -the links bar is out of place, it is no way aligned withthe rest of the template. - Their is no depth on the header, either make a good glow in their, or put some abstract in their Any way keep up making templates and post ur next one, Daz
Bit simple and it's very small. I don't like the render as the middle either. I like the nav and it would be great if that nav box on the left followed you as you scrolled down the page. The header is a bit simple but if you were to put more details into the connecting bars i'm sure that would sort the problem.
I don't know why but i don't like its ..! srry but for a first time is that template no bad my rate : 6/10 srry for the rate but its realy no my style...!
hmm.. i like ur color choices, and the wires. but i think that instead of link1,link2,ect. u should accually put sumthign there(so pl know wat to put there) o and also for the banner maybe downsize it a tad bit, its awesome for a 1st template. i think joe is right but he didnt exactly say it nicly becuase h had nothign good to say at all and he was very blunt. i looked through his rep and think that ppl shoudl stop lokign at that becuase as far as i can tell like 10 ppl -reped him for like one insodent, which wasnt exactly very nice from wat i can tell lol
