1st Render Original - Here Render - Code: http://www.freewebs.com/theninth/Yuna%20Crying%20renderwatermark.png
its aight i guess but i wouldnt of done hair for a first b/c you didnt do a good job of cutting it out. you also left out to hair in the back. i would read these tho they're very helpful http://www.gamerenders.com/forum/index.php?showtopic=218970 http://www.gamerenders.com/forum/index.php?showtopic=131832
Small & Easy, but good place to start for a beginner, check those render links and good luck in the future, maybe find a tut that does curve cuts aswell like mine