1st Ever

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  1. May 13, 2005 at 9:02 AM #1
    Redz

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    this is my 1st ever template wot do u fink to it and wot needs inprovin :)


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  2. May 13, 2005 at 9:40 AM #2
    Daz

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    ok first
    - bevel looks out of place where it says news etc
    - can't read text on navigation
    - the atom seems to blured
    - bitmap text is too big on the header, doesn't look effective change the font

    keep on reading some tuts, and you will produce some decent temps, :P Daz
     
  3. May 13, 2005 at 10:11 AM #3
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    Navigation looks good, but I don't really like the rest, strokes just piss me off!

    If you did use bevels, don't use em ever again.
     
  4. May 13, 2005 at 11:14 AM #4
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    OMG DONT USE BEVEL!!

    Back to temp:

    Its not bad for a first, just the text needs to be clearer
     
  5. May 13, 2005 at 11:29 AM #5
    Hydra

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    What! Strokes look great, you just got too use the right colours.

    Anyway, loose the bevel and do some more work on that banner. Good attempt for your first.
     
  6. May 13, 2005 at 5:59 PM #6
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    What! Strokes look great, you just got too use the right colours.

    Anyway, loose the bevel and do some more work on that banner. Good attempt for your first. [/b][/quote]
    You lie. Strokes look terrible, show me ONE site that looks GREAT and has strokes.
     
  7. May 14, 2005 at 5:59 AM #7
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  8. May 14, 2005 at 7:12 AM #8
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    Heh, i like the layout, gj
     
  9. May 14, 2005 at 7:17 AM #9
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    dont like the text, and could use a more complex banner.... good job for your first
     
  10. May 14, 2005 at 11:42 AM #10
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    You lie. Strokes look terrible, show me ONE site that looks GREAT and has strokes. [/b][/quote]
    i have to agree... strokes look real bad

    thp, it's very good for a first
     
  11. May 14, 2005 at 12:52 PM #11
    echoepidemic

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    The strokes ruin it.
     
  12. May 14, 2005 at 5:25 PM #12
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    vry nice
     
  13. May 14, 2005 at 10:07 PM #13
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    sometimes stroke look good, not here tho.
     

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