1rst Render

orig -> http://www.gowallpapers.com/walls.aspx?cat=Games&id=96

 

its pretty good for your first render but it is pretty choppy

 

Its really choppy. Nice try though, keep at it!

 

Well look at the orig image. Its pritty choppy also. I think you did a good job

 

try a hight quality picture. looks a little choppy and bright