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for your first one is it very good!

it's indeed choppy and you can improve it more but i like it

 

Good job for your first, the left leg is abit weird though.

 

thnx

 

Too many white spots and choppy, but considering it's your first render, that's what you need to work on for your second and beyond. Good try.

 

LOL, yeah the leg is pretty wierd...good for a first time though. Im cutting out my true first render now. I hope mine comes out good.

I have no clue how some of these guys are so good at its...its so damned hard and frusterating.

 

please provide a clickable direct site link to your original image and rehost your render.

 

Okay I've editted it, you can see the URL from the original picture at the bottom of the first post.

 

You did good for your first Render. I remember my first....it blew. haha. Anyways, gj!

 

GJ on your first

 

Choppy in some places... otherwise great cut!

 

I totally Agree
:tongue: Stole the words outta my mouth

 

its choppy. but good on your 1st

 

Thats a good cut for a first, but what bothers me, is that your render is not on a transparent background. Remember to make it to a transparent BG nexttime, also looks better

 

Great cut for your first. Keep it up and compete with others