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  1. Galione

    Galione Well-Known Member

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    tell me what ya think it's a quicky during class
     
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    Canvas size is too big, text is bad, and colors and effects are boring.
     
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    um k anyone else with some real crits?
     
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    It has a nice flow to it to give it a real fiery look, plus the transition from blur to sharpened to blue really adds depth to how the person is in the middle of the flames. Lighting is also pretty good. The only things I don't really dig is the text and the contrast. Maybe add a little contrast to the middle of it so the light coming from the top doesn't overwhelm it too much and just fix that text; it's way too small, the effects have a different toning from the flames of the background, and it seems almost cramped. Good work otherwise!
     
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    ty for taking the time to write something useful I will play around with some of things you said and see what I can come up with
     
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    i like it, mate.

    Depth is great, flow is awesome, love the effects. Only thing i dont like is the text. seems out of place and the wrong font. Although, with the composition of this tag, its hard to figure out the best placement. i'd say, over her left breast.
     
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    Looks great. 9/10

    you should make a tutorial or somthing, i loveit.
     
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    looks great to me, just the text needs work bro
     
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    Yeah, the color and the lighting are amazing, it's just the text. Everything else is outstanding, though. :)
     
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    ty guys yeah it was hard for me to figure a good text and placement and I tried to make like a fire text .... obviously that didn't work XD
     
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    meh nvm
     
  12. Galione

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    meh nvm what?
     

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