that is pretty well done mate. You might even have something to teach me about c4d sigs only thing though? get rid of the light source on the bottom (maybe make it more of a natural light, or a light emitted by the c4d itself.) And add a ripple or wave effect. Then it will be moneh! =]] 9/10 good job. ps. Underwater text placement is always good when it flows WITH the water scene i.e. color/placement and such
thanks for the critiques everyone I will take in account what you have all said and when I get the chance add a second version