details seem oversaturated
pretty cool, lacks flow imo, and a bit sharp in parts
her hands are like crabs
typo needs work
agreed with all, left needs more
just kinda small and dull
like the first one best just has a lot of blur it seems
JMU is pretty good.
Lol not sure about the spyware part, but yea I think lots of people get it from school
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