First sig in a few months. Harsh criticism/feedback desired. [img]
I'm not liking this too much. You have no focus established, and the brightness is pretty bad. The text is also poorly placed. The light blue...
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I'm in agreement with Broken. The ones up close need work. I also think that the ones at the very back could use a bit of work though. [img]...
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I agree with MaTaDoR. Blending needs work, other than that, nice job.
Used becks, "Colour Smudge Tag" tutorial, strayed at the end(obviously). Tell me what you think. ^_^ [img]
I like V3 the best. The colors look very bland, and the grayscale seems to suit it pretty well. Nice job.
It looks great. But you may want to reduce the sharpness in certain areas of the signature. And her shoulders look odd. You may want to blend...
I'm not liking the brightness in the first one, but it isn't bad. Second isn't bad either, but lose the borders.
[img] Although my outcome was heavily modified, I highly recommend this tutorial. It was clear and concise. Very to the point. Good for...
Best from you thus far, in my opinion. Although you need to work on the text.
I'm not a fan of V1s coloring. It doesn't suit the render very well. I like V2 a lot though. Nice work.
I attempted to remove the negative space in V3, and it reduced it's overall blandness as well.
V3 Attempted to reduce negative space [img] V2 Edited lighting [img] V1 Original [img] Once again, just messing around with smudging+settings to...
Colors look bland. Not bad, but to be honest, I really liked your old avatar.
Unfortunately, you could probably say that about all my work. In any case, here is V2 with improved text. [img]
Sending credits...
[img] Tried creating something that has a lot of depth. I managed to do it with the left portion of the right side of the smudge. Left smudge...
I'm with Rainbow on the first one. I'm not liking the colors... Although the second looks great. Your avatar is kick ass too by the way. Nice...
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Thanks for the comment. Do I smell sarcasm?
[img] V2 [img] Just experimenting with some smudge/layer settings. C&C highly appreciated. :)
Aye, much butter. Nice work. ;)
I agree with Verbal. Also think the background is overblurred. Still looks great though, keep it up. :)
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