I personally like the color choice, but maybe there could be some effects in the background to make it look better.
The version with the light source behind his head looks better. It looks nice aside from the Avalon Designs text near the bottom, and maybe there...
The second one looks very good, nice sense of depth and blending. However, the text in the first one is throwing me off a bit. Overall they both...
Alright, I'll go ahead and fix that. Thanks for all the feedback so far. 1st post edited with the new versions.
It looks good, but I also think that the text stands out too much. I think making a clipping mask out of it would make it look a little better.
V1: [img] V2: [img] V3: [img] V4: [img] (TWOTF is an acronym for a name I use on several other forums) Please CnC.
The C4D on his back doesn't look that good to me. There also could be just an extra effect or two near the bottom on the right side to balance it...
I really like this one, the background effects are all really nice. Great job.
The updated version of #1 and #2 look pretty good, but the 3rd one isn't as good. Some foreground effects would work nicely in it.
There's not much flow to it. There should be more depth and colors as well.
They both look very nice, especially the T.I. tag.
Sending credits for 3, 13, and 15 for LR. They all look amazing.
There could definitely be some more effects in it, mainly in the background.
I like both versions a lot, they have great compo.
V2 is definitely the best. I really like the effects and text.
Like others have said, blend the render into the background a little more with gradient maps, photo filters, etc.
The sprite is pretty small, the tag itself should be less wide IMO. Everything else looks pretty nice, though.
I think adding depth to it would make it look a lot better. Other than that, I think it looks nice.
That looks pretty good for your first one of those. It could probably use some more colors.
Some nice blending, but like others have said, the text doesn't work that well.
The colored one is better. I like the effects in both versions, good coloring as well.
The shine should go, the render on the far right needs to be more visible. The way it is now makes the text the focal point.
Very good for your first few sigs. All you really have to do now is look at tuts and get better that way.
I like this one, it has some really nice effects.
There are some good effect render packs in the Resources section of this site. Anyway, it looks like you're improving a bit, but there still...
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