Amen to this. Do something on your background. Observe proper flow and coloring as these are necessary for a good tag.
That is truly an astounding masterpiece. I can actually feel the essence of it. Good job!
Yeah, it's really busy. Maybe you need to blur some part in order to have a focal point. It's way too sharp as well and too much.
Good texts. Good quality. However, I find the background a bit plain.
To improve your texts, you need to make them simple and plain. I know this sounds crazy, but simplicity keeps everything fine. Try to get a fine...
Do work on your background, text, render, and flow. I bet you're just a newbie in Photoshop. Well, all I can say is, try to explore more...
I like most of the part of it but not the area beside the face of the render; it does appear ordinary compare to some of the parts of your tag.
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